The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words

Every year, Numbers of Car users are increasing exponentially. While
this
can be seen as a sign of growing Standard of living, Use of personal vehicles
are causing
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is causing
many problems
to
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in
our environment and society.
This
essay will discuss why we should discourage people to use their personal convince in order to reduce these problems. One of the well knows problem with the growing numbers of Cars is increase in pollution level. Most of the four and two wheelers are running on fossil fuel like petrol and diesel, who are the leading contributors to the increase in CO2 level in
environment
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the environment
.
For Example
, Temperature of
earth
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the earth
is increasing in every 5
year
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years
by 1 degree which is due to increase in greenhouse gases like CO2, Methane etc.
hence
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
Hence
, to mitigate pollution level
,
Accept space
,
we need to encourage people to use public transport against their personal transportation mean. Now a
days
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day
, no
matters
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matter
its weekends or weekdays, Roads are completely packed with more numbers or cars than any other vehicle. These counts are directly proportional to the counts of roads accidents in every country. It’s a well know trend that more cars on roads leads to more accidents on roads. Excess of everything is bad. Example, In India only more than a million cases registered every year and thousands of people loss their life on to road accidents caused by cars only. We need to stop
rely
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relying
on these Vehicles or situation will not
going
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go
to improve.
This
essays
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essay
has discussed both the problem, Pollution and increasing Road accident
,
Accept space
,
due to
growing dependency
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the growing dependency
a growing dependency
of Cars. People need to realize that Private transportation are causing more harm to society
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
doing well.

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