It will be more effect full for improve the deftly on our own road is to have a stricter punishment for driver who driving carelessly . Do you agree or disagree?

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more effective

full for

improve

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improving

the safety on our own road is to have a stricter

punishment

for those

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drivers

who drive carelessly. I completely agree with

this

opinion and think that if it is followed it will definitely work

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believe that a hard and following rules only can change our own road safety. Even if someone

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for that traffic police or other security team give them that

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on the other hand

Other people will see it and become alert and they will drive safely.

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breaks

the traffic light rules are driving with

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and for the police immediately get him and

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rules, it means

not only caught him but

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need to give management every time

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Secondly, when

the rules and regulation followed strictly for

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everyone, then

then

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make a fear and responsibility on

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peoples

mind. Like when someone see that rules are following hardly for everyone

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he or she will not drive recklessly to conclude I strongly believe And agree on the heart and the streak

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

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It will be more effect full for improve the deftly on our own road is to have a stricter punishment for driver who driving carelessly . Do you agree or disagree?

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in the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be the passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

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