Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
Nowadays some humans argue that
zoos
help to defend wild animals
, whereas
others believe that they should be closed down because of poor conditions. This
essay will include both sides and conclude that zoos
ensure good facilities and safety for fauna.
On the one hand, there are plenty of species that are very close to disappearing, the reason for that is
animals
which could not able to survive in wildlife due to
predators and poachers. In that case, zoos
protect and provide great conditions for the growth of their population. A good example could be noticed in Kazakhstan where snow leopards were in the red book which means they may be subject to extinction, but they upsurge their population thanks to zoos
located in Kazakhstan.
On the other hand
, wild animals
that are arranged in captivity may lose their freedom, and skills for surviving and could degrade into weak species. They can bravely run through steppes and feel animal instincts while
hunting. However
, despite this
, the fauna stored in a small and limited space could force them to be distressed and lead them to the amount of diseases, since they can not behave naturally. My uncle is a professional zoologist and recently time he visited a local zoo. He said he was disappointed when he saw a panda that acted like a human. Since his childhood, he had not seen any pandas and started learning to survive from a person. Therefore
, a panda can not climb trees, or eat bamboo as usual as other pandas, the saddest thing is that he was sent to a circus to make people laugh.
In conclusion, it is true that animals
are forced to live in limited spaces, but in many cases, they successfully survive and continue to soar their types.Submitted by a.seytzhanova on
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task achievement
While your essay showcases a good understanding of the topic, aim to delve deeper into why some believe zoos should be closed. Discuss specific examples of cruelty or ethical concerns to balance the essay further.
coherence cohesion
To enhance coherence, try using a wider variety of linking words and phrases. This will help your ideas flow more naturally from one to the next.
task achievement
Great job providing specific examples, like the Kazakhstan snow leopards, which significantly strengthen your argument.
coherence cohesion
Your introduction and conclusion effectively set up and wrap up your essay, hinting at a clear personal standpoint.
Your opinion
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