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Modern technology is changing our world. This has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. It also has disadvantages such as destroying the differences between cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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With the advent of newer technologies in the field of communication, people could come under
one
 umbrella. It is adversely affected to some of the communities by mixing up of different cultures to form a new
one
. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the above mentioned statement.
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On
one
 hand, it became much easier and convenient for the people to gather with a common vision
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of
 a particular subject or a specific idea, because of the newer inventions
,
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,
 which made conveying of a message much easier.
For instance
, in a
protest which
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protest, which
 was organised against the current government of Egypt in 2014, nearly 40,000 people participated merely with a three days of advertisements through the social
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
.
Hence
this
 newer
explorations
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exploration
 became inevitable and pivotal on the other in the human's life.
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On
 the other hand,
the newer
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the newest
 advancements in
this
are became
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are becoming
 a ground and helped to expand the globalization, which gradually helped other cultures to intrude into the indigenous communities.
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In
 other words, it mixed the cultures with
one
 another to form a new
one
.
For
example most
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example, most
 of the Indian Metropolitan cities are following western traditions, mainly in the field of fashion and in their dietary, as the western companies took the Upper Hand in these in the Cities.
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In
 conclusion, though it is inevitable that a minor drawback to happen with any new inventions, but the
advancement particularly
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advancement, particularly
 in the field of communication made humans to travel a long distance.

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