In some countries , the government promote public transportation and discourage the private vehicles what are the advantage and disadvantages?

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due to pollution the authority decides to restrict the private cars and launch the public transport
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numerous merits as well as demerits of
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with the advantage of public buses and trains
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of all
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it is
more cheaper
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cheaper
than personal vehicles and it carries numbers of people at one time due to
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anyone can easily afford it
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it is available in reasonable price
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Apart from that public transportation
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help to cut down the traffic jams
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As a
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result it
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result, it
improves the situation of roads
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in the direction of
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be precise public taxies can reduce the air pollution
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Turning to the drawbacks of public vehicles it provides inconvenience to get to far places by separation of work and destinations and in buses there is
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a lot
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leads them to argue with others for seats
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As a result
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people prefer to visit by their own cars
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Furthermore
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it is time consuming and cannot maintain the consistency of
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plan for an activity or event
schedule
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people become late for their work just
bacause
for the reason that; on account of
because
of their unreliability
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Morever
in addition
Moreover
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travelling
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with
them is risky not giving the
gurantee
give surety or assume responsibility
guarantee
guarantees
of safety
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To
conculde
decide by reasoning; draw or come to a conclusion
conclude
coincide
concede
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believe that the benefits of public transport far outweigh the disadvantages because it is
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dismissing
dismiss
the ration of traffic congestion
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