More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

In the modern generation rid of the agricultural background. Youngsters, immigrate to urban side and work for technical aspects,
such
as software engineers. It seems, the production of agricultural proportion has decreased in past two decades. Because, Agri work is an exhausting
one
. Let me discuss here both aspects of the view. Generally, Agriculture is essentially
one
for the country. Because, Without
food
humans could not survive in
this
world. The three main reasons recent days people affecting.
Firstly
, nowadays growing to huge levels of the hybrid foods
such
as vegetables and using more toxic.
Secondly
, people facing the plenty of health related issues on
this
,
such
as infertility and more cardiac disease and other issues.
Thirdly
,
this
hybrid
food
item is increased nowadays, for former deficiency.
Moreover
, Urban places, people spend to more money consume
this
vegetable. Humans survival variety of natural nutrients is an important
one
. Our ancestors, have more healthy
food
eat, because of organic farming.
On the other Hand
, Urban side people should be created the more awareness and form the terrace garden,
this
will increase the
food
productivity.
Nevertheless
, the agricultural background people should join hands with their community and produce the
food
and used the modern organic techniques. In
this
way
food
forming efficiency has increased and export our
food
. Meanwhile, government attention to and tend the more subsidy to the farmers and encourage the quality of products export with minimal tax. In
this
way country economic level should be increased. To conclude, Agriculture is essentially
one
and people should follow and continue the forming. Working people should pay attention and prevent their agricultural lands and forming continuously. Government observation and based upon
this
to provide the loans to formers people. Obviously, people pay the attention for organic farming and increase the country growth levels.
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