The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There has been a considerable increment in a motor

car

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uses

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use

in the UK since it was

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introduced in 1888. Negatively,

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enormous

car

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uses lead to elevate the pollution in the atmosphere resulting in global warming;

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global rules should be enforced to curb

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future calamities; I agree with the application of laws. After the introduction of a piston engine, they were

bearing

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born

car

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companies who are making a different type of cars with distinct features and price range.

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competition between automobile makers leads to reasonable rates of cars;

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more individuals can afford to buy.

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, there was only a ford company that

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made

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car

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, but in 2000 there are more than 15 automobile makers are available in the UK.

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, more and more personnel are taking benefit of

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innovation to save time

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their daily works. On the other side,

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increasing

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user resulting in a rise in carbon dioxide and

sulfur

an abundant tasteless odorless multivalent nonmetallic element; best known in yellow crystals; occurs in many sulphide and sulphate minerals and even in native form (especially in volcanic regions)

sulphur

in the environment by burning more and more fuel.

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could be created air pollution and raise the earth’s temperature, which leads to the melting of glaciers resulting in an apocalypse. For a proactive approach, local government or international bodies should take measures to tackle atmospheric devastation. Alternate use of renewable energy sources like solar or wind energy can help to alleviate earth temperature.

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, the government should promote the sales of electric vehicles by providing subsidy, which can help for excellent penetration in the market and make them aware of the advantages of it. In my conclusion, it is an administrator’s responsibility to keep their citizens happy and gives freedom to purchase whatever they want.

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, it is everyone’s duty that we should keep our earth safe

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an administrator should pass

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laws that can avoid planet to jeopardize.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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307 words

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