nowadays children spend more time playing computer games than doing sports. Why is it happening? Does it have a positive or negative effect on their development?

In recent year was founded that students prefer to play computer games

instead

outdoor games. The reason for

that is

enormous advancement

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the enormous advancement

of new innovation because of modernization and urbanization. In my

view

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view, this

this

is a negative advancement that influences the physical and mental improvement of children.

Firstly

,

this

is a modern lifestyle, where parents cannot spend their spare time with children due to furious timetable in terms of personal and professional life. In any case, they attempt to give them all the offices and devices under one rooftop.

For example

, my brother and his wife

are working

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work

all day and keep their child at home for security reasons.

Also

, nowadays students study at home because of quarantine and it takes 4-5 hours per day. After

that they

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that, they

start to play computer games

such

as GTA, CS Go and Sims.

Secondly

, messing around on PCs can debilitate the visual perception of

children which

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children, which

may loosen their development in

study

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the study

.

Moreover

, there is no physical action included while playing on contraptions and along these lines it might

reason for

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reason, for

destructive infections,

for example

, hypertension and respiratory failure.

However

, advanced games hone the psyche of youngsters quickly contrasted with different games.

Additionally

, it expands their IQ. __ In conclusion, it is true that upcoming generations

is used

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are used

to play computer games than physical activities due to

modern era

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the modern era

and lack of

parents

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parents'

time. ________________________________________________________