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People are becoming dependent on the Internet and phone. Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays automation is playing a key role in every individual’s
life
. They are tending to depend on
Internet
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the internet
the Internet
 and phone for everything. In
this
 essay, I will discuss how the advantages outweigh the drawbacks. Mobile phone and internet usage by anyone and anywhere in today’s
life
.
That is
, people are using
technology
 in every walk of
life whether
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life, whether
 it is bill payment, entertainment, travel, news etc.
For instance
, to watch a latest movie you do not need to walk to the cinema hall rather you can sit at home and watch it on your computer. In an another example, to pay the mobile bill you can do it by using your phone and you do not need to stand in long queues to do so. All in all,
technology
 is playing a prominent role in helping people by making the
life
 easy. Despite, having lot of benefits, there are various drawbacks to it. People cannot completely rely on
technology
 as it has negative impacts. One of them is, technical error while doing some important transaction.
In addition
 to that, fake information
by
Suggestion
from
 various channels can lead people into
wrong direction
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the wrong direction
.
Therefore
, people cannot depend on telecommunications for everything. To encapsulate, though machinery is very much necessary to keep up
on
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with
 the plethora of things, at the same time it can cause negative results.
Hence
, it would be safe if we do not always bet on
technology
 for everything.
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