In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reasons for this and how can be solved?

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In most developing and developed countries, people suffer from various
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problems
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as cardiovascular disease, high cholesterol levels and diabetes since they are leading an unhealthy
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. There are several reasons for
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problem and various measures could be taken by governments and individuals to improve society’s
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. Obviously, unhealthy eating habits and sedentary life could cause a large number of
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problems as these two are major risk factors for many diseases. Nowadays, most people use their car to commute their offices and a small minority of them tend to walk.
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, at their workplace little physical activity have been required, because they sit behind their desk all day long. Having said that, some people lead a sedentary
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as they are too lazy to get enough exercise or too ignorant about their
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.
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that, fast foods and processed
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appeal to most people who have a hectic
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to cook their own
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or eager to buy these cheap foods.
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, in many countries, people are struggling with obesity, particularly children. Governments and individuals can tackle
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problem together.
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of all, government should promote a healthy
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among its people and provide decent facilities for them. In detail, states should raise public awareness about obesity related diseases and even they could decrease fast
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consumption by imposing high tax on them.
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are able to encourage people to get enough exercise, once governments invest in sports facilities like gyms, sports complex and so on. To achieve healthy society, people
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have to take responsibility of their
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and develop healthy habits, exercising three times a week and avoid processed foods. In conclusion, longevity and well-being of people can only be achieved if only they exercise more often and eat healthy
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also
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government can encourage them to lead a healthy
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