Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison, but that some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community. Do you agree or disagree?
It is suggested by some people that unpaid work with the purpose of helping society is a good alternative to keep certain criminals in the prison.
Although
at first
glance, such
measures seem to be dangerous, they can be beneficial both to the community and prisoners.
To begin
with, not every defendant causes great harm by their actions. It means that the majority of wrongdoers are not serious criminals, many of them are found guilty of small offences such
as shoplifting or pick pocketing. Thereby, it is not entirely fair to equate all of them and imprison every perpetrator, even for a very small crime, together with much more serious and dangerous criminals such
as murderers, drug addicts, robbers, rapists, etcetera
.
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Moreover
, by living in the same cell with so immoral malefactors, small offenders may get intimation and guidelines to commit more serious crimes. Thus
the best way to use their energy in a constructive way and to protect them from even worse deeds is involving
in unpaid community labour.
Another point to consider is that involving prisoners to social work will ultimately help the nation to save financial resources. Suggestion
is involved
will be involved
In other words
, for the development and advancement of society, for instance
, construction of roads, building dams and maintaining drainage systems, every government needs to hire a large proportion of workers. Thus authorities
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Thus, authorities
this
task to offenders and at the same time use the significant financial resources of the nation for the other important areas such
as the health care system and education
As a conclusion, not all criminals should be kept in prisons, but some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work. Moreover
, such
measures will both protect them from the influence of other much more violent perpetrators in prison and bring great benefits to the nation.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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