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In spite of the advance made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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Food
, the primary factor of human life as well as others animal, has critically played role important to our
world
 since living things are generated. In the present day, various technologies in
agriculture
 work have always been developed for harvesting performance increased. Meanwhile,
this
 resource is still
in sufficient
of a quantity not able to fulfill a need or requirement
insufficient
, many areas in the
world
 are encountering with
food
 diminished.
This
 scenario is made from climate change,
exponentially
Suggestion
exponential
 population growth and the
agriculture
 job deduction.
Hence
, in
this
 article, I would like to illustrate the factors which affecting
this
 phenomenon and provides the solution. With regard to the current
environment
Suggestion
environmental
 situation, the climate change has the most impact.
Food
 should be collected from farming or forest by which seasons are directly affected to
production
. When our
world
 consists of
this
 change, it is inevitably
distorted which
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distorted, which
 cause the
production
 lowering.
Additionally
, the resource, which produced from natural approach, is explicitly limited and some categories consume the long time growing. With
this
 in mind, the
food
 stock is gradually decreased. The other key of
this
 point is over population. Be recognized that the modern
world
 consists of too many people.
Therefore
, the greater source is required. Simultaneously, the forest, which is involved
to
Suggestion
in
food
production
, has already
decayed which
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decayed, which
 mostly employed to build human aspiration. Not only two factors that mentioned
before but
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before, but
also
 include the modern aspect of people. Most of people think that
agriculture
 occupation is not suitable to them due to a lot of burden and hardly salary.
Then
, the abatement of
food
production
 is rapidly
occurred
Suggestion
occurring
, despite they have various advance implements supported. Those factors referred before seen to have the
seriously
Suggestion
serious
 impact. Thereby,
this
 obstacle can be solved by technology enhancement method.
This
 procedure is depending on
technology
Suggestion
technological
 ability. If it has more advanced, the greater
food
production
 will be appeared.
Moreover
, the
environment refurbished
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environment, refurbished
 will
also
 demonstrate in order to recover
production
 area. Eventually, the government should fix the modern
people
Suggestion
person
person's
peoples'
 perspective about farming job.
This
 will improve the amount of
agriculture
 job and
also
 increase the
production
 rate.

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