People in many countries spend more and more time far away from their families. Why does this happen and what effects will it have on them and their families.

For a decade or so, there has been an increasing trend in many nations where
people
are spending most of their generation in the far-flung corners away from their families. The potential
reasons
for
this
occurrence and its inevitable consequences on individuals and
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their immediate family members will be discussed in the essay. The two main
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reasons
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studies and future prospects. The young generation from developing countries is heading to foreign universities since
such
institutes provide flexible and sophisticated courses which cannot be availed by living in a home country.
For example
, post-graduation courses consume a significant amount of generation
as a result
,
people
stay overseas far-off from their families.
Moreover
, experienced
people
tend to go to distant places in order to improve their job prospects. Sometimes lucrative offers are being given to them.
Such
opportunities could be once in a lifetime to them. For these
reasons
, they move to distant locations and most of their year is spent in
such
places. Despite having advantages, there are some far-reaching repercussions.
Firstly
, sending a child for
further
studies
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overseas is not only challenging for him but for his parents
also
. They will
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since they will not be able to provide psychological and emotional support to their child, which he or she may require residing in a distant place.
Secondly
, if a person is married and doing a job across the country, he will not be able to facilitate his child's learning crucial skills
such
as social, emotional, cognitive development and moral during their formative years.
As a result
, children will have trouble with
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varied behaviour patterns in the future. In conclusion,
people
spend most of their past away from their families because of personal
reasons
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understandable.
However
,
this
development is causing psychological strain on both.
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