People in many countries spend more and more time far away from their families. Why does this happen and what effects will it have on them and their families.
For a decade or so, there has been an increasing trend in many nations where
people
are spending most of their generation in the far-flung corners away from their families. The potential reasons
for this
occurrence and its inevitable consequences on individuals and to
their immediate family members will be discussed in the essay.
The two main Change preposition
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chief
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reasons
are mainly
studies and future prospects. The young generation from developing countries is heading to foreign universities since Rephrase
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such
institutes provide flexible and sophisticated courses which cannot be availed by living in a home country. For example
, post-graduation courses consume a significant amount of generation as a result
, people
stay overseas far-off from their families. Moreover
, experienced people
tend to go to distant places in order to improve their job prospects. Sometimes lucrative offers are being given to them. Such
opportunities could be once in a lifetime to them. For these reasons
, they move to distant locations and most of their year is spent in such
places.
Despite having advantages, there are some far-reaching repercussions. Firstly
, sending a child for further
studies to
overseas is not only challenging for him but for his parents Change preposition
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also
. They will be remained
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remain
have remained
tensed
since they will not be able to provide psychological and emotional support to their child, which he or she may require residing in a distant place. Replace the word
tense
Secondly
, if a person is married and doing a job across the country, he will not be able to facilitate his child's learning crucial skills such
as social, emotional, cognitive development and moral during their formative years. As a result
, children will have trouble with the
varied behaviour patterns in the future.
In conclusion, Correct article usage
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people
spend most of their past away from their families because of personal reasons
which are
understandable. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
However
, this
development is causing psychological strain on both.Submitted by rateshpunj on
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