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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is a common belief that the best way discovering how to survive with
climate
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 rather than preventing. I will elaborate
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 with supporting by inhibiting
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. In the modern life, the technology and consuming more than need is the essential reason of
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. Day by day, the ice where in the North is decreasing,
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also the temparature is
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the temperature is also
also the temperature is
 rising. Over the years, all the scientists who research about methodology and environment sign to eliminate
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. Obviously, the measurements cannot utilize to the world a better place.
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, in a small town, all the cars and production centres have restricted since 2018 in my city.
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, air pollution or other healing process in the environment has not appeared anymore.
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 to say, the authorities should manage with more effective precautions. I will agree that if the people take care about
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 and solutions, all humanity will survive without any concern.
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, another belief supports living with the
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 may be supply benefits to us.
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, everybody can focus and adapt to new temperature or other
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, when it has not inhibited, it has been never ended. To rise temperature is a serious issue for the living organism. Even if they adapt these type of
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, some type of organism cannot exist to suffer with a high temperature. Due to, the balance of the ecosystem can not heal, many of insects, birds, reptile will not have been in the new habitat. In conclusion, the best solution to eliminate
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 is preventing it and other issues related to it. Admittedly, the nature is fragile against the humanity, so we should treat more consciously.
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, the authorities should be careful to solve and manage it.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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