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Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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There are nearly 250 countries in the world and nearly all of them has their own
language
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. The most popular
language
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 in the world is English and
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 many people learn English. Due to globalization, scientists have predicted that people will be speaking one
language
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 in the future.
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, speaking in a single
language
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 has its own benefits. The most important advantage will be an easy communication between people. Relations between nations will improve, tourists can travel anywhere without of thinking about
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 barrier.
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, there are negative effects as well. The most important negative effect will be damage to the culture of the country, because
language
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 represents the customs and traditions of the country, literature, poetry and the history. With the lost of the
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language some
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language, some
 countries lost their history.
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, the employment of many people will be lost. As they are a lot of foreign
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 teachers, translators and local guides will lose their jobs. If everyone would speak the same
language
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, no one would require guides and teachers and it will result in the unemployment of a huge number of people. In conclusion, having a single
language
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 has its own benefits, but it will create unemployment and a risk of loosing the culture and history of a country.
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, I strongly believe that it will have a negative effect on society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural heritage
  • language extinction
  • international communication
  • educational barriers
  • global homogenization
  • cultural identity
  • translation tools
  • linguistic resources
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