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People think that money can bring happiness. However, having more than enough money leads to problems. Do u agree or disagree?

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Some people define salary as a source of happiness, albeit people will have to contend with some major problems resultant of owning steep cash.It is disagreed that
prosperity
 can be achieved by other approaches except fund.
This
 essay will debate other activities except
wealth
,
Accept space
,
work, hobby and family, being seen as a joy and
prosperity
 and some other factors in details.
Firstly
, pay is not something makes you feel enjoy and achieve a successful growth
,
Accept space
,
for some, being around a family or being chock-full of work can sense a satisfaction and enjoy.Unless people have checked, it is possible having a feeling of joy from being with the loved ones,
however
 the human value is not measured by the
wealth
 they own.
Moreover
, it feels unique but being busy with the activities you are fond of, can share the feelings of
prosperity
For example
, 87% of Uzbek people spend their most time hanging out with people they appreciate, as
wealth
 doesn't play a vital role in their soul.
In other words
, every and each person interpret pleasure in various ways and for those favouring to vulnerable who live in poverty is the main source of feeling happy. It seems unbelievable, but some people help poor humans as much as they afford despite taking low salary, having a moderate living condition or many eatables
however
 they aren't affluent people but they are spiritually wealthy humans.
For example
, 63% of Japanese donate and help ropey people, as it results feeling a great relish. In conclusion,
wealth
 can be a consequence of the satisfaction in life in some prospective but welfare of family, loved ones, work and mainly help is the major result of the
prosperity
 in the
heart
the locus of feelings and intuitions
heart
t

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