Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent developments ever will. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that older advances in technology were more beneficial to mankind than new ones. I disagree with
this
opinion as
such
new technologies as the
internet
and robotic surgery brought and will give many benefits to
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modern
people
all around the globe.
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progress in
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.
Firstly
, the
internet
was developed not very long ago and has become vital in many areas of our
life
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. Our work, rest, and normal functioning are now impossible without using
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web. It brought
people
possibility
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to easily communicate, exchange ideas,
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financial operations quickly and conveniently. Access to all the information needed is now accessible in a few seconds from our home or workplace. Older communication techniques like a post or telegraph never could bring
such
benefits for the past generations of humans.
Moreover
, the
internet
has made space exploration possible, and it will bring new perspectives for
people
on our planet.
Secondly
, modern medicine
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at a very high pace nowadays. Advances in
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robotic surgery have brought
possibility
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to many
people
. More complicated operations and procedures have become accessible in
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modern hospitals.
For example
, in the past brain tumours were almost incurable,
while
today,
such
patients frequently have a good prognosis.
Moreover
, now doctors can treat
such
diseases as myocardial infarction or stroke more effectively and with
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less risk to patients. It is well known that
such
health conditions are the main cause of morbidity in the developed countries.
To conclude
, modern technological developments
such
as
internet
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and robotic surgery present brilliant opportunities to
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modern
people
. They allow freely communicate, work more effectively, and present good opportunities to treat different health conditions.

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