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Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities ,which are played alone .To what exteny do you agree or disagree .

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It is an irrefutable fact that we are learning so many valuable lessons from the different types of tasks, But some individuals assert that joint actions have more benefit
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 work alone. I agree with
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 statement. In
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 essay, I intend to discuss my views before the reasonable conclusion can be drawn. There are several reasons why the teamwork is really helpful for any project.
Firstly
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, Team games like cricket, football and basketball, etc. Make a player, good human, because throughout these joint efforts, we can learn different skills from another player's.
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, Football is the harmony game, where every player does their job to win the game in their country. It's given us lessons everyone's having their own importance a and respect.
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, the partnership helps to learn different tactics and behaviour of individuals.
On the other hand
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, Some people's who argues that playing alone is better because some time in the unity people feels jealousy of each other.
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, I remember on the
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 Football work cup, so many players just play for their own credit. They didn't pass the ball to their team members.
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, Game like tennis done by only one person. The individual is responsible for the own won or loss. They have no chance to blame someone for their failures. To put in a nutshell, I pen down and say that, each coin has two sides, but team activities in more beneficial to learn some precious skills as compared to playing alone.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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