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Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eat meat can cause serious health problems . Do you agree or disagree?

#diet #meat #health
Nowadays a lot of people in the world are becoming vegetarians because consuming
meat
 can cause some health issues
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It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that not all individuals who eat
meat
 will face with health problems
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 On the one hand
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 eating large amount of
meat
 leads to sugary diabetes and increases the risk of cancer
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Because of
this
 vegetarian diet is
good idea
Suggestion
a good idea
 to
expend
extend in one or more directions
expand
 the lifespan and stay healthy
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Moreover
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 vegetables and fruits are essential in our
life
 because they provide us with various types nutrients and without them our body would not work properly
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 Vegetarian diet often gives people energy
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 but it does not make people overweight
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also
 they will save money because
meat
 is more expensive than other food products
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Nevertheless
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human` s
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human, s
human s
 organs require a little amount of
meat
 to be full of energy whole day
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Meat
 is
rich source
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a rich source
 of protein and organic iron, which makes our bones strong and helps to improve our immunity
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 Vegetarians always have to take vitamins and medicine
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otherwise
 levels of
hemoglobin
a hemoprotein composed of globin and heme that gives red blood cells their characteristic color; function primarily to transport oxygen from the lungs to the body tissues
haemoglobin
 in
blood drop
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the blood drop
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which leads to serious illnesses
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such
 as cancer and kidney disease
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anemia
a deficiency of red blood cells
anaemia
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Eating
measured amount
Suggestion
a measured amount
 of
meat
 and other organic food leads to healthy
life
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 In conclusion
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 the given topic is considered to be essential because it
is is connected
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is connected
connects
connecting
 with human
life
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I do not agree that everybody should be vegetarian, because low consumption of
meat
 will give benefits and results in a healthy
life
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