The animal species are becoming extinct due to human activities on laand and in sea l.What are the reasons and solutions?

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it is undeniably true that
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
families are disappearing day by day.The main fact behind
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man made activities on land and in shore.
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this reasons
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this reason
these reasons
of the circumstance and solutions as well. To commence with
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the myriad number of situations where the fauna can not able to survive.
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and for most, deforestation is one of the major
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causes
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due to which
habitates
an established custom
habits
habitats
of the animals are
distrupted
marked by breaks or gaps
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distributed
distracted
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huge
number
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amount
of industrialization, development of cities and massive usage of wood, individuals
cutdown
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cut down
the trees.They do not plant many trees rather than cut it.
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, many forests are being converted into town and villages, Another reason is over-hunting the animal.Many people have
fonded
set up or found
founded
funded
of animal hunt.In order to satisfy their own
hungernsss
a physiological need for food; the consequence of food deprivation
hungers
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they kill animals.For an instance, according to survey of
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North American republic containing 50 states - 48 conterminous states in North America plus Alaska in northwest North America and the Hawaiian Islands in the Pacific Ocean; achieved independence in 1776
America
, around 25% of animals lost their inhabitants due to deforestation.
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, tourism is one of the main pollutants in sea water because of wastages.Not decomposed materials dumped into the sea by travellers
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and oil industry pour bad water into the deep.These facts are hazardous for
marin
of or relating to the sea
marine
-life.
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the animal species are becoming extinct. The mentioned caused have some solution too
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and
main workable solution
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the main workable solution
is applied
strick
rigidly accurate; allowing no deviation from a standard
strict
strikes
rule against hunters.
Government
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The government
should make law
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if people are killing more animals than they have to fine money for it.
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, government can
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organise
awareness function
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an awareness function
to plant more trees
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of cut down
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and build some zoo park where extinct species may live better and feel secure.In chemical and other industry should no pour their toxic water into
river
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the river
rivers
a river
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industry. Agglomerating all the above points
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it can be recapitulated that there are many
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kinds
of way to save animal life l. Society should understand about
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situation and try to
succor
a number or letter indicating quality (especially of a student's performance)
score
scare
secure
this
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endangered extinct
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
.

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