Countries are becoming more and more similar because people buy same products anywhere in the world. Is this a positive or negative development?

The global advance of famous brands
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thair
of them or themselves
their
tar
hair
products,
obsorb
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absorbs
absorb
, multitude of costumers attention and achieve a lot of success in customize, too. All over the world, societies will frequently modify the exact way of each other, since similar staffs are costumed in an area as elsewhere. There is an obvious argue that whether
this
progress is beneficial or detrimental. Globalization, makes the world much smaller.
Firstly
, The discovery of the nuclear and quick vehicle
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,
such
as air crafts, pave the way for international trades, and thousands of companies are connected and initiated corporations of
thair
of them or themselves
their
branch with a Monopoly of specific brands.
therefore
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Therefore
, The investment in other territories has a result, in the improvements of developing countries. McDonald
for instance
, is becoming one of the most popular fast-food
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a famous fast food attempt
the famous fast food attempt
any person to try it. So
this
feature will decrease the concern of losing money for
investores
someone who commits capital in order to gain financial returns
investors
.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
, The United in consuming
spesefic
(sometimes followed by 'to') applying to or characterized by or distinguishing something particular or special or unique
specific
wares
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,
gives visitors the ability to reach
thair
of them or themselves
their
desirable staffs in a case
of if they travel
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if they travel
to other countries.
for
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For
instance, parents who used to apply one kind of
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diaper
for
thair
of them or themselves
their
baby will not be
worry
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worried
of not to find it.
This
will even cut down
in
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on
a burden people had to carry on in the past. The worldwide use of some
spesefic
(sometimes followed by 'to') applying to or characterized by or distinguishing something particular or special or unique
specific
crafts will raise the job opportunity,
hence
the good reputation and
success fulness
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successful
successfulness
in marketing will attract a lot of traders to invest
thair
of them or themselves
their
there
money
.
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Which means, proving job opportunities. Take Nice, Adidas and other brands, as an example, they are famous in
thair
of them or themselves
their
butifull
delighting the senses or exciting intellectual or emotional admiration
beautiful
beautifully
bountiful
textiles
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shoes, bags
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and....
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Since
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is
reliable the
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men
try to put
thair
of them or themselves
their
money on them rather than the new ones. While
this
similarity in utilizing commodities, could have beneficial outcomes, it will come to make our global, dull and collerless, traveling to some countries where are as same as ours will be mean less, purchasing will lost its excitement, above of that, tinny an new manufactures cannot compete with those popular and abiquitose commodities ,
hence
, many of them will be cramped and faced downturn in the market, To sum up,
although
,
this
fashion may cause some run off the mile purchase, but the again we should consider it as an optimistic approach after all, the social content and convinete will be much more important.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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