Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people are willing to get more

experience

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and learn about

diffrent

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

countries, that in

past

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the past

it was a common idea that

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information is only obtained by

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

.

but

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But

in today's

modern life

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modern life, this

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can be done by using

internet

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the internet

or watching TV too. In my opinion, I suspect that visiting other places can be

second

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to none way

for

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of

getting knowledge from other

foriegn

of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)

foreign

countries and I prefer it more than gain them via

internet

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the internet

or TV because it is a real

experience

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essay we will

discusse

to consider or examine in speech or writing

discuss

both aspects. Indeed

,

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,

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

beyond the

boundries

the line or plane indicating the limit or extent of something

boundaries

of one's country have a numerous benefits and nothing can

compaired

examine and note the similarities or differences of

compare

with it. The initial point would be that as it is a real

experience

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you can get new feelings and impressions which you would never get from technologies. On top of that, you can provide a good

undrestanding

the cognitive condition of someone who understands

understanding

of

thier

of them or themselves

their

culture

,

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,

you can taste their traditional food and so on.

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Moreover you

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Moreover, you

can communicate

eith

expresses the means used

with

new people and learn new thing that may help you in terms of study. Language or any other things. In considering

other viewpoint

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the other viewpoint

, that

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experience

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can get from TV or

internet

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the internet

, the point can be mentioned

,

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,

that

nowedays by

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nowadays, by

nowadays by

developing technology at a rapid race there are lots of websites, TV_Shows

,

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,

channels and many other things that they

can made

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can make

all of that things possible and accessible for us

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they can be a powerful learning tools ant be out of the

wourld

everything that exists anywhere

world

ward

. You can sit at home and just by one click, all of the world would be

availble

obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service

available

for you and it is a really first_rate. By the way of conclusion, actually by seeing the power

of technology

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technology, it

technology itself

technology itself itself

it us hard to say th

at travel

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

ing is the cream of the crop way to learn about other countries, but I believe that physical

ly travel

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

ing would be more exciting and can have a more thrill