Many people believe that the high levels of violence in films today are causing serious social problems. What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

Movies in today's scenario have a good amount of brutality in them.
intensity and roughness have created many problems in society. Now we will discuss about the effects of these kind of issues and resolution of the same.
To begin
with, let's talk about the main problem, violence in films leads to brainwashing the audiences. Movies does not only increase the insensitivity in the society, but it
injected nudity.
For instance
, rape scenes in the movies. Pictures have audience of different demographic levels, for instances, adolescents, adults, teenagers, senior citizens etc.
, brutality in movies has different effects on different people, some take it just as a movie other applies it in their life, especially if the main character of the film is the one whom they admire.
As a result
, public become irresponsible for their acts and insensitive for the civilization. To lessen the effect of broadcasts, public needs inculcate the habit of not doing what they saw. They are
required to teach their children's what is right and what is wrong. Directors of feature films
have a responsibility to create content as per the audience so that the scenes are age appropriates. People need to be responsible for their actions and
required to stand for their doings. At the conclusion, Movies are required to be given certification as per their contents, if they are comedy without any vulgarity
they can be good for children's
not. The main responsibility lies with the director, producers and cast of the movies, to not to create anything which will affect the society adversely.
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