The use of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter are replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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These days, face-to-face communication is being replaced with online conversations using social media apps,
such
as Facebook, Twitter.
Although
there are several benefits,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that these advantages are outweighed by many disadvantages. The most important benefits is that social networking sites have made it much easier for us to keep in contact with everyone, regardless of geographic locations.
For instance
, students studying abroad can keep in touch with their families and friends every day by using the video call features of Facebook or other applications.. Another benefit is that these online conversations help us save a great deal of time compared to the traditional communication. To illustrate, it takes much time us to have a direct conversation because
us
plural of "I"
we
must manage time, place of meeting.
However
, with only a smartphone or a computer connecting the Internet, we could have an appointment like in the real life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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