NOWdays many students have the opportunity to study some or all of their course in a foreign country .Do the advantages outweigh disadvantagea?

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It is true to say that more and more pupils are going to other countries for significant periods of time either to find a job or to study

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There are

plethora

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a plethora

of positive along with few negative of

this

and from my perspective pros are more than

cons

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the cons

. One of the main

benefit

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benefits

of heading overseas is that it

brodens

make broader

broadens

your horizons.

meanwhile

at the same time but in another place

Meanwhile

, you have the chance to meet people from different cultural backgrounds and learn to cope with foreign customs and food.

This

can make you more rounded it as a person

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For example

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according to

Human development index

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a human development index

a Human development index

the Human development index

, the rate of studying abroad is increased by 20% per year.

As a result

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boosting the overall economy of overseas

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Secondly

, moving abroad can lead to a better quality of life.

In other words

, you can gain qualification and language skills, which may improve promotion prospects on your return.

furthermore

in addition

Furthermore

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they have to chance learnt at

prestigous

having an illustrious reputation; respected

prestigious

university

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which might

leads

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lead

to open more doors for

job

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a job

jobs

There are a lot of disadvantages behind the same; Culture shock is

major problem

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a major problem

the major problem

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many

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Many

people who take a year out find it hard to cope with

language barrier

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the language barrier

a language barrier

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the food and general cultural differences.

consequently

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Consequently

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feeling of

home sickness

a longing to return home

homesickness

and

sense

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a sense

the sense

of isolation occurs.

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addition

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it can be difficult to start a new life from

scartch

cause friction

scratch

.Means, when you move abroad

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you have to make new friends and find your place in the community.

This

process takes time and can be especially

challengeing

requiring full use of your abilities or resources

challenging

if there is

also

language barrier

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a language barrier

the language barrier

to deal with

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In conclusion

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I would argue that

benefits

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the benefits

of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks.

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Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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