The following bar chart shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European country city in 1960, 1980, and 2000.

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The given bar chart illustrates how transportation modes, used to travel to and from work, had been changed in a European country from 1960 to 2000. The figure is given in

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unit

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, it can be seen that

traveling

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travelling

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car had a dramatic increase

whereas

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others fell. The

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travelers

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travellers

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who

traveled

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travelled

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cars

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had the strongest growth, rising significantly from the low

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of approximately 7% in 1960 to the highest

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of all modes, 37%, in 2000. Following a similar pattern, the

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of bus

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travelers

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travellers

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went up gradually to 26% in the first 20 years, 1960-1980. After reaching

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peak in 1980, the

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dropped back to 16% in 2000.

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, the

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of bike

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travelers

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travellers

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and foot

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travelers

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decreased dramatically from 25% in 1960 to 6% in 2000 and from 34% in 1960 to just under 10% in 2000 respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, travelers with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

150 words

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