IELTS 13 - Exam 2 - Writing Task 2 Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some persons believe that today we have too many options. I almost totally agree with
this
statement. In my opinion, we are living in a world with a great development in science and in society; that`s why we have many choices and chances to develop our potential in life.
For example
, Nowadays you can find multiple options for finding a job. There are many websites specialized in finding jobs or hiring
proffesionals
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professionals
such
as “freelancer.
com
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Com
” or “
upwork
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up work
.
com
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Come
Com
”.
Furthermore
, the internet has may companies
such
as Facebook, Google, Amazon or
Youtube
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YouTube
that can open jobs opportunities
almost for everyone
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for almost everyone
. People can look for manual jobs opportunities or local companies, but
also
with the development of the communications an individual can work for someone in a different country.
Likewise
, social conquests have given more chances for people.
For instance
, we have more free time than in the past, and in that moment we can share time with our families or think about future ideas or personal projects.
Otherwise
, there are certain limits with all these opportunities. It is clear that not everybody
have
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has
the chance to access to the internet for search
works
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opportunities; and even with today’s social rights it’s not enough for accomplishing personal aspirations and dreams. In conclusion, I believe that we have many chances and more opportunities than years before; but we can`t be too satisfied, there is a long road to find the complete justice and happiness that society needs for people have more chances and opportunities.
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