Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is very hard to know
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
subjects are more or less important in schools right now. Even with today`s
development we
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development, we
can`t say that History is less necessary than Science and Technology, even Sport, Arts and other social subjects are very important in our academic formation. History is a key subject.
This
subject is vital for young students ethic and cultural develop; knowing their
nations
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nations'
histories, the origins of our biggest success and failures as humanity, is very important because understanding it prepares our future men and women to overcome situations with the historical experience and more wisdom. Better prepared citizens with culture and knowledge of their history, ensure that future world leaders will not make the same mistakes from the past. Science and Technology aver very important signatures too. Without them, technological development would be as slow as it was during the dark ages. It can’t be a coincidence that since
schools
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school
school's
started science classes the humanity have been in a constant scientific revolution. Nowadays students probably learn more physics in their
first
years than many of Isaac Newton colleagues.
Otherwise
, today we need to prepare students not only for science and history, it’s important to develop boys and
girls
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girls'
girl
civic culture and healthy habits. In conclusion, I believe that a balance between science, history and other subjects is needed in our schools
nowaday
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
. As the students
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find
their
passion
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passion, then
then
they can specialize in a subject or another, but at their
first
ages we
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ages, we
must provide them all the theory and tools to become good persons in their future.
This
can only be achieved with the right balance between subjects.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Historical perspective
  • Analytical skills
  • Contextual understanding
  • Technological advancements
  • STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, Mathematics)
  • Innovation
  • Interdisciplinary
  • Job market
  • Climate crisis
  • Cultural identity
  • Critical thinking
  • Humanities
  • Contemporary issues
  • Integration
  • Tech-savvy
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