In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

There has been
many
Suggestion
much
progress in food industry and in agriculture, but progress is not the same for all the countries and there still many persons around the globe going hungry. There are several reasons why
this
is happening; differences between nations economic developments,
desertification
and other reasons related to people culture and eating habits.
Of
Suggestion
For
all these reasons, probably the differences between nations economic development is the easiest to solve, but the egoism and ambitions of multinational companies and some countries
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
are not helping to solve the
problem
. International organizations
such
as the United Nations could coordinate
humanities
Suggestion
humanity's
actions to solve
this
problem
, and developed countries could help
poorest nations
Suggestion
the poorest nations
sharing their technology, knowledge and some funds for
investings
the act of investing; laying out money or capital in an enterprise with the expectation of profit
investing
.
Desertification
is
also
one of the main reasons of all the problems with food
suply
give something useful or necessary to
supply
. It is related to the climate change due to nations industrial activities. To solve
this
problem
,
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
could develop policies to increase
enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
friendly technologies at the industries, and
also
restrict the pollution levels with
enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
taxes. The most difficult
problem
to solve is the one related to the culture and food habits of some countries. It will take many years to change these traditions, but with more education and access to the internet, probably these countries will find their own solutions. In my opinion,
this
is a very sad
problem
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
kills millions of people every
years
Suggestion
year
.
Collaboration
Suggestion
Collaborate
and coordinate actions of
international communnity
Suggestion
the international community
international community
international communities
could solve
this
problem
, but
first
we have to change as humanity and be less selfish with other peoples around the world. That will be the
first
step to erase hungry from Earth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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