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In some countries, many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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Nowadays, it is a trend for young adults of every category, economically strong as well as backward class, to take
break
Suggestion
breaks
 between high school studies and university
education
.
This
 kind of scenario is indeed playing a vital role in
expansion
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the expansion
 of their perspective towards the
life
. In upcoming paragraphs, I am going to discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of
this
 matter.
To begin
 with the advantage of
this
, very
first
 advantage of taking between secondary
education
 and tertiary
education
 is, youngsters could explore the various components and cultures of different parts of the world, which could be directly affected to the lifestyle of that person. He or she could be able to learn how the people are living their lives and what are the issues or important of each module of the
life
 cycle.
Secondly
, they will be prepared to tackle any kind of upcoming situation within their
life
. They would be mature enough, how to react and hot to fight with the matter.
Thirdly
, by doing so, the income could be directly used
to
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in
 their day to day expanses and additional they can
also
 use that money for
further
education
.
On the other hand
, some experts are twisting the matter on
other side
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the other side
 with the disadvantages. According to them, by taking
break
Suggestion
breaks
 between both the phases, a person would not be able to drive back his or her mind, due to the regular income. There would be a battle in their mind about what to choose, job or
education
. To recapitulate, in my opinion, taking
break
Suggestion
breaks
 for young adults right after high school is definitely beneficial to explore the how to live the
life
 and certainly, it is
also
 helpful for them to understand of various rituals of
life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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