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Recent figures show that there is an increase in number of crimes among the young generation in big cities throughout the world.

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Nowadays, the prisons across the globe is overflowing by the increased rate of
crime
 by juveniles. Legislations and governments are indeed helpless by
this
 unavoidable act of youngsters. In upcoming paragraphs, we are going to understand about the actual reasons behind it and possible solution to avoid these circumstances. There are numerous reasons behind
this
 notion.
Firstly
, some youngsters
have not got
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has not gotten
had not gotten
 primary or secondary education during their actual span of academics.
Thus
, they would be definitely deeply impacted by criminal & terrorists.
In addition
 to
this
, due to their vulnerability, crimes and other illegal activities are
fascinating according
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fascinating, according
 their mind and they will try to do those.
Secondly
, wide number of movies and web series have been released by entertainment sector, in which they are portraying the villains as the hero. The youngsters will try to replicate them in actual life.
Thirdly
, they think that the oddest way is the shortest path for earning money. To accommodate their basic requirement of survival they will attach with criminals or other illegal organizations. To overcome these problems,
first
 of all, the youngsters should be
proper
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properly
 educated with at least basic or primary education.
Secondly
,
government
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the government
 should actively produce the films and documentaries which could be really helpful to place them disported from
crime
 or terrorism. In a
nut shell
the shell around the kernel of a nut
nutshell
, it is undeniable that the youngsters are vulnerable and heavily impacted by the
crime
, terrorism and other illegal activities and due to their insensible
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
, the
crime
 rate has been boosted,
however
, a comprehensive measure must be taken by
government
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the government
 in accordance with universities, for their brighter future.
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