The urban transport system receives more funds compared to the rural transport system. Why do you think it is so? How can it be solved?

Among the many contentious issues in today’s world is the funding for transportation in different

areas

. The finance for the urban transport system earns more when

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to those of rural

areas

.

This

essay will examine the reasons for

this

and suggest some possible solutions. One of the reasons for

this

is that funding varies directly with the population density in each city. Simply put, the higher the number of people who use the transport system, the more it needs to be provided to satisfy the people’s demand,

as a result

, the pure amount of transportation available increased in the same way. Another reason is that

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essential to

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in modern days. Every second

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, since it offers the possibility that more work can be done. The better the transportation, the less time

needed

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for each commute,

thus

, the reasons why more cash

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required to

further

enhance the system in urban

areas

packed with a large group of people Tackling

such

difficulties will not be easy, but there are measures that can be taken.

Firstly

, the governments can lower the amount of taxes collected in rural

areas

, encouraging people to take the initiative and start their occupation there

instead

of the city

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; reducing the largely packed workers to be spread among the countryside, allowing for more funds to be provided.

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,

this

might not be enough to solve the problem, the individuals in the area

also

must put

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efforts.

This

can be achieved by producing more

overall

profits in their town, showing governments that they can contribute to benefits the

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of the country

as well as

urban

areas

, stating that more attention and funding are to be considered in rural

areas

as well. In conclusion, given the previously-mentioned causes, having governments

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taxes and individuals putting in their efforts to improve their economy in rural

areas

are both

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effective

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of dealing with these issues.