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University students must pay all tuition fees, because it benefits mostly them individually, rather than the society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

#university #students #tuition #fees #society
Today the
Internet
 has become an indispensable part for a large number of people when technology is replacing some types of media
such
 as newspapers, television, and books little by little.
However
, the
internet
 is
also
 harmful and causes serious losses.
This
 essay will address some problems with overusing the
internet
 and propose solutions. One of the biggest problems facing young people who abuse the
Internet
 is a bad effect on their lifestyle. The more they focus on the
internet
, the easier it is to forget the real goal of life, and
hence
, they waste time, money, distracting their attention from more important matters
such
 as family, career, and love.
For instance
, students who addict online games usually attract all attention to game characters
instead
 of lessons in their class. They live in a virtual world and away from life and true feelings, as a consequence, they get more and more diseases both the mind and the body.
Furthermore
, they will have a false view of reality, become lazy and fearful in the difficulties of life.
This
 problem could be addressed by the close supervision of parents and the self-awareness of each student about using the
Internet
. Another problem concerns security, as
internet
 users, can be easily stolen their personal information. If you are not careful to accidentally click on an unsecured link or website, the personal data on your computer will be transferred to hackers' computers with a variety of programs spreading viruses, and they can abuse your information to deceive many of your friends afterward. The best way for us to solve the problem is to be prudent to use any website on the
internet
 and not to click links and websites which you don't know.
In addition
, the government
also
 needs to enact laws to protect cyber security and bar hackers from doing bad online things. In conclusion, the
Internet
 will be a big danger unless people take advantage of it,
thus
 everyone should reconsider their own usage to use it for the right purpose, at the right time and in the right place.
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