In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
It is
certianly
true that some nations, people are becoming heavier and standards of definitely or positively ('sure' is sometimes used informally for 'surely')
certainly
health
and well-being are deteriorating. While there are several causes of this
, there are also
measures that can be taken to address this
problem.
The main causes of the health
crisis currently affecting so many individuals are over-consumption of poor quality sustenance as well as lack of exercise
. Convenience food
and junk food
, such
as microwave dinners, chocolate bars and fast food
, have become common feature
of modern life. Eating excessive amounts of these high-fat meals causes many to gain weight, which can in turn have detrimental effects on people's general Suggestion
a common feature
health
. For example
, numerous people are suffering from food
-related diseases such
as diabetes, hypertension and high cholesterol these days and require daily medication to keep their glucose, blood pressure and cholesterol levels under control. Besides
, people are generally more sedentary nowadays due to advanced technology in the form of gadgets that do the manual work people once did.
The most pratical
solution to concerned with actual use or practice
practical
this
problem is a government-sponsored awarensss
campaign regarding eating habits and the need for regular having knowledge of
awareness
exercise
. An effective advertising campaign could warn the public of the dangers of a poor diet while children could also
be educated at school. The raised awareness would lead to more people eating in healthier way
. Suggestion
a healthier way
healthier ways
In addition
, there is the need to promote daily exercise
and make available facilities for exercising so that people do not lead lives that are too sedentary, which is a common phenomenon these days. This
could result in a dramatic decrease in obesity-related illness such
as stroke and heart disease.
In conclusion, it is the onus of individuals and governments to curb this
pressing issue. The current health
crisis has been caused by an over-reliance on unhealthy food
as well as inadequate exercise
and the government should curtail this
through effective education and provision of readily available exercising facilities.Submitted by joan.santani on
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