there is more and more violence in movies and on tv, therefore it is necessary for the government to control the amount of it to decrease the violent crime in the society. do you agree or disagree

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It's true that there are great amount of movies and TV dramas contain more and more violence scenes today. While some m
ay believes
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may believe
that by controlling
this
kind of visual works can help reduce violent crimes in the real world, I can hardly agree with
this
idea. V
iolence
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Violent
crime
is not directly related to
this
r
eason since
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reason, since
there are many other aspects could make a person commit
crime
.
Firstly
, if one faces unsatisfied salary while he or she still has to take care of the whole family for decades, he may be too stressful to think normally and commit violence
crime
.
Secondly
, due to unbalanced society structure, someone has been beaten for years in school, he might fight back someday when he can not i
ndure
put up with something or somebody unpleasant
endure
any more. So
For example
, a young boy in our country, who b
orned
brought into existence
born
burned
bond
in a very poor family, when his classmate found out t
he true,
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the truth
they bossed him and manipulates him for years, and he
finally
got angry and commit
crime
. So the problem of r
eal world
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the real world
is the priority issue of violent
crime
. If the government a
re taking
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is taking
takes
control of the amount of v
iolenc
an act of aggression (as one against a person who resists)
violence
in movies and TV, that will
also
arouse some problems.
Firstly
, it will not help p
rotecting
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protect
to protect
the diversity of c
luture.
a particular society at a particular time and place
culture
Movies and TV s
eriers
similar things placed in order or happening one after another
series
serials
are a
rt
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artistic
creations, the reflections of r
eal world.
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the real world
Cutting down one specific kinds of works will send a message to the c
reaters
a person who grows or makes or invents things
creators
creatures
of
this
area, they will lose freedom & motivation to create. In conclusion, I agree that reducing the v
iolence
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violent
scene will have more disadvantages than benefit.
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