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People are using a lot of online language translation apps. Do the bene fits of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Translation
apps
 are gaining traction in our society for professional and personal use. Travelers and business professionals around the world
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heavily on it.
Such
 global knowledge sharing is
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benecial
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beneficial
 for everyone. The
translation
apps
 and services are handy and convenient to use. People are able to quickly communicate with locals. They avoid the
language
 learning curve, which is a tedious job in itself. To give an example,
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 business and travel have risen astronomically in
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Eastern Asian countries like Japan and India. Tourism to India has almost doubled in the
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 five years. Japanese visa applications are increasing at
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% rate Year on Year from India.
In addition
 to that,
translation
apps
 are computer software services that keep on improving as the user base grows. And it's a many to many translations, as in, English is now translated to every major and minor
language
 of the world and in return, major languages like Hindi, Japanese,
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, can be translated back to English. The flip side is,
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 to a dramatic decline in the
language learning
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 process itself. And associated with it, is the existential crisis of languages. Data shows that 400 languages that were once
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 in the year 2000, have vanished as per the linguists of the University of California. In addendum to that, the multi-lingual human cognitive capacity becomes dormant, as we now outsource that activity to
language
translation
apps
. In conclusion, I would say that the pros out ways the cons.
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language
translation
apps
 are
hence
 an eminent tool of the human process and ingenuity.
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