The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some people believe that the average standard of people's health will be lower in the coming years and people will take less care about themselves. I personally believed that idea is completely not true due to recently famous Corona virus which is really dangerous and everybody is nowadays conscious about the risks of

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illness.

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, people are now aware of the importance of thing like washing hands and not touching everywhere and especially the face. After

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virus, people think more about their health and the meals that they weather consume or purchase. They choose healthy and nutritious and healthy meals rather than junky food and snacks.

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more people are becoming vegetarian nowadays and being a vegetarian is in other word being healthy and friendly with the environment and animals for some of the people. It was commonly believed before that when a person is sick, that person should wear a mask, but now we see people wearing mask and using masks in considering staying safe from all viruses outside your home. I mean,

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virus just made all people to care about their selves more than always and avoiding from all the dirtiness and illness around them.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

1. Standard of health
2. Average
3. Lower
4. Future
5. Aging population
6. Chronic diseases
7. Sedentary lifestyle
8. Lack of exercise
9. Poor dietary habits
10. Environmental pollution
11. Technological advancements
12. Impact on health

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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An increasing number of people are choosing cosmetic surgeries. Why do people have operations to change the way they look? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Do children behave better when they are physically punished or rewarded? Discuss both the view and give your opinion.