The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below illustrates the amount of the different kinds of meats including fish, lamb, beef and chicken, which consumed in a European country between 1979 and 2004. The information is measured in Grams per person per week. Overall, the majority of consumption was chicken and beef in the period given and lamb and fish were less popular meats. The beef had a fluctuated duration between 1979 and 1984 and began with more than 200 grams than decreased gradually and constantly to around 100 grams in final years. In terms of the fish, it started with more than 50 grams and had a steady term and declined to around 40 grams in 2004.
Likewise
, Lamb started with exactly 150 grams,
then
after a fluctuated season between 1980 and 1999, decreased dramatically to more than 50 grams in 2004. 
However
, we see the reverse for the chicken. It started with less than 150 and
then
increased significantly and continuously and reached the peak in around 2000 with more than 250 grams.
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