The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates the amount of the different kinds of meats including fish, lamb, beef and chicken, which
consumed
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in a European country between 1979 and 2004. The information is measured in
Grams
per person per week.
Overall
, the majority of consumption was chicken and beef in the period given and lamb and fish were less popular meats. The beef had a fluctuated duration between 1979 and 1984 and began with more than 200
grams
than
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then
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decreased gradually and constantly to around 100
grams
in
final
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years. In terms of the fish, it started with more than 50
grams
and had a steady term and declined to around 40
grams
in 2004.
Likewise
, Lamb started with exactly 150
grams
,
then
after a
fluctuated
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season between 1980 and 1999, decreased dramatically to more than 50
grams
in 2004. 
However
, we see the reverse for the chicken. It started with less than 150 and
then
increased significantly and continuously and reached
the
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a
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peak
in
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around 2000 with more than 250
grams
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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