The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph below illustrates the amount of the different kinds of meats including fish, lamb, beef and chicken, which

consumed

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in a European country between 1979 and 2004. The information is measured in

Grams

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per person per week.

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, the majority of consumption was chicken and beef in the period given and lamb and fish were less popular meats. The beef had a fluctuated duration between 1979 and 1984 and began with more than 200

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than

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decreased gradually and constantly to around 100

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final

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years. In terms of the fish, it started with more than 50

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and had a steady term and declined to around 40

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in 2004.

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, Lamb started with exactly 150

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then

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after a

fluctuated

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fluctuating

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season between 1980 and 1999, decreased dramatically to more than 50

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in 2004.

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, we see the reverse for the chicken. It started with less than 150 and

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increased significantly and continuously and reached

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peak

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apply

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around 2000 with more than 250

grams

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

170 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumption trends
steady increase
most consumed meat
relatively stable
general decline
pronounced decline
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