Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

In today's modern life, technology improvement has almost predominated our entire world. Technology

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development, especially

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scope has changed our way of living and more specifically has turned over ways of communicating dramatically. In my view, these changes have both obvious positive and negative points.

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with, without a doubt the advent of

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the internet

has led to significant achievements.

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and foremost, the

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has caused communicating much easier for everybody. Nowadays, people from different parts of the world can communicate with each other, whilst compared to the past, people just could telegraph or call each other and

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they only could keep in touch with those who already known.

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, by the emergence of the

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and social apps

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as Facebook, Instagram and so on they are now available to make friends even with people who are in the other continents.

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, the

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has led to

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the appearance

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as online marketing which were impossible without the

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, the arrival of

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caused other companies or firms which were existed before, expand their market and become globalized.

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, the

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the internet

has provided the access of attending online educational classes for people residing in different countries,

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participating in worldwide classes is no longer a dream.

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, it is crystal clear that how

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the beneficial internet

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has been for

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everybody, especially

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tormenting during corona virus (COVID-19) pandemic.

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, in a nutshell, the

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arrival has had notable impacts on our lives.

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damages on our communicating qualification. Many people are of the opinion that by the emergence of

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the internet

and social apps, these days, people are mostly developing their relationships online and tend to avoid the actual face-to-face contact.

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happens to be the main problem of technology

development

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, in the past children used to be seen playing with their peers on the

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streets, though

, nowadays they are mostly being the fan of online games which by the by

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seeming

to be one-person game.

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, psychologists believe that,

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can have serious negative impacts on children's social

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. Technology can

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make people being

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detached

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from the real world and what is happening around them because all it can be seen today is that even if people are put

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side, they

all are staring into their phone and they hardly ever talk to each other. To sum up, the positive impacts of technology

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development especially

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development, especially

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scope are irrefutable.

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, I strictly believe

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people, especially

youngsters have to be taught the appropriate usage of

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