It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject. What are causes? And what will be effects on society?
In recent years, there is an alarming increasing of students who do not decide on studying
science
education. This
inclination is not only a noticeable problem caused by lack of interest in subjects and scarcity of job opportunities but
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Due to those reasons above, the deficiency in students in science
fields might lead to these unfavorable
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market, but
also
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In conclusion, there are two reasons why fewer students choose science
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