Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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should knowSuggestion
child
,
how to behave in an acceptable manner in a society.Accept space
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Therefore
, it is believed by some, onus
is on the parent's shoulders to teach Suggestion
the onus
how be a
responsible citizen while others hold an opinion that Suggestion
how to be a
school contribution
should be there. Personally speakingSuggestion
the school contribution
,
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combined effort
of Suggestion
the combined effort
a combined effort
both
parents and teachers can help to teach our generation how to be good citizen
.
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good citizens
a good citizen
care taker
and they are responsible for instilling moral values. a custodian who is hired to take care of something (property or a person)
caretaker
In other words
, they have huge impact
on intellectual behaviour and character traits.Suggestion
a huge impact
Moreover
,
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,
role
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responsible citizen
.It is well known fact that those who have good relations with their families are less Suggestion
responsible citizens
likely to involve in
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likely to involve
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criminal
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such
as crome
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parents
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parents'
role
cannot be neglected at any cost.
On the other hand
,
some people believe that children spend the majority of their time in school in learning and teachers are their Accept space
,
role
model since they listen to them carefully what they say.In other words
, while studying in school children encouter
other students having different nature and educator can help them how to behave and be tolerant to others. School helps in development of attitude and come together
encounter
personallity
and teachers should teach them how to handle various the complex of all the attributes--behavioral, temperamental, emotional and mental--that characterize a unique individual
personality
personality
with grace and modesty. Suggestion
personalities
Hence
, Teachers are imperative in devoleping
relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply
developing
children
character.
In my opinion, Human development is a complex interplay of many Suggestion
children's
child's
factore
anything that contributes causally to a result
factors
such
as parents and teachers and both
are inextricably linked to each others.To elaborate,
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,
both
are suppliment
to each other.add as a supplement to what seems insufficient
supplements
supplemental
supplemented
so
, to a very great extent or degree
So
combined effort
of Suggestion
the combined effort
a combined effort
both
can transform a child into responsible member
of Suggestion
responsible members
a responsible member
nation
.
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the nation
a nation
in
conclusion, despite people have different views. Suggestion
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