IELTS 8 - Exam 2 - Writing Task 2 Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Today’s technical progress has changed the methods of

humans

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human

humans'

relationships. The

beggining

the event consisting of the start of something

beginning

beginnings

of the social network era has made communication

more easy

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easier

despite the long distances and cultural differences between countries. Overall,

this

is a

possitive

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

development for humanity. Before the revolution of the internet it was very difficult to

stablish

set up or found

establish

a

dialog

a conversation between two persons

dialogue

with friends or families abroad.

Distances

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Distance

calls were very

expensives

high in price or charging high prices

expensive

and people tried to speak as fast as possible because a 10

minutes

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minute

conversation could cos almost 50 or 80 dollars. Nowadays, with software

such

as Whatsapp, we can have video calls for hours for less than 5 dollars.

In addition

, meeting persons with

same interest

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the same interest

were more difficult in the past than in the present. There are digital forums and websites for all

kind

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kinds

of hobbies and people share very easily their knowledge, culture, research’s and technologies. Even for works opportunities or academic develop there are electronic interviews or digital courses. In my personal experience,

this

year I

did

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have done

a scholarship interview by video call; and I started to work in a

european

of or relating to or characteristic of Europe or the people of Europe

European

website sending movie´s

reviews

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review

by email, and

this

is the only way how I communicate with my boss who lives in Spain. In conclusion, I believe that today´s scientific progress have been very important in

humanity

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human

interaction and communication. Probably there are some evil uses for these

develop

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developers

, but most of the time, citizens from

al

quantifier; used with either mass or count nouns to indicate the whole number or amount of or every one of a class

all

the world uses it for

right purposes

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the right purposes

. That’s why I defend

technological revolution

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the technological revolution

a technological revolution

as a way to unite countries and families, making communication

easiest

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easier

as ever.