The graph below gives information about international tourist arrival in different parts of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrival in different parts of the world.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the number of international
travelers
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who arrived at
five
distinct regions in the world during a 15-year period.
Overall
, all figures for
five
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areas witnessed
the
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upward trend, except
a
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slight decrease
of
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North America in the
last
five
years of the period. In 1990, the total of foreign visitors in North America was 70
million
, which was the highest among
five
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regions, and more than doubled the statistic of Central and Eastern Europe. In the
next
fifteen years, the figure for Central and Eastern Europe experienced a threefold increase compared to that in 1990, which
finally
peaked at nearly 90
million
. Meanwhile, the number of North American international tourists in 2000 hit the highest point at 90
million
before minimally decreasing to nearly the same figure for Central and Eastern Europe in 2005. In the remaining three areas, the statistics of Sub-Saharan Africa and South America began at under 10
million
in 1990
,
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and did not witness dramatic increases, which
finally
stayed at under 20
million
each in 2005. At the same time,
that
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of
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South-East Asia experienced a 30-
million
growth, from more than 20
million
in 1995 to under 50
million
in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words five, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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