The graph below gives information about international tourist arrival in different parts of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the number of international
travelers
who arrived at Change the spelling
travellers
five
distinct regions in the world during a 15-year period.
Overall
, all figures for five
areas witnessed Correct article usage
the five
the
upward trend, exceptCorrect article usage
an
a
slight decrease Change preposition
for a
of
North America in the Change preposition
in
last
five
years of the period.
In 1990, the total of foreign visitors in North America was 70 million
, which was the highest among five
regions, and more than doubled the statistic of Central and Eastern Europe. In the Correct article usage
the five
next
fifteen years, the figure for Central and Eastern Europe experienced a threefold increase compared to that in 1990, which finally
peaked at nearly 90 million
. Meanwhile, the number of North American international tourists in 2000 hit the highest point at 90 million
before minimally decreasing to nearly the same figure for Central and Eastern Europe in 2005.
In the remaining three areas, the statistics of Sub-Saharan Africa and South America began at under 10 million
in 1990,
and did not witness dramatic increases, which Remove the comma
apply
finally
stayed at under 20 million
each in 2005. At the same time, that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
South-East Asia experienced a 30-Change preposition
apply
million
growth, from more than 20 million
in 1995 to under 50 million
in 2005.Submitted by jeremyykr on
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