The bar chart below shows the hours per week that teenagers spend doing certain activities in Chester from 2002 to 2007 š
The bar chart illustrates how many
hours
adolescents in Chester spent on several activities each week between 2002 and 2007.š¤£
Overall
, the most popular activity over the period given was watching TV, whereas
bowling was the least favourite. Going to pubs and discos, watching TV and shopping all showed an increase in the number of hours
teenager
spent on these activities. The other pursuits showed a decrease in Fix the agreement mistake
teenagers
hours
, except watching DVD's
which fluctuated.
Change noun form
DVDs
Young
generation spent 25 Correct article usage
The young
hours
watching television in the initial year (2002) which increased to almost 40 hours
per week in the final year (2007). Both going to pubs and discos, and shopping, more than doubled in hours
from over 5 to 15 in 2007.
While
teenagers occupied 10 hours
doing homework every week in 2002, the same figure dropped to just over 5 hours
in 2007. Playing sports fell more dramatically from 10 hours
to 3 hours
. Bowling was under 5 hours
weekly throughout the entire period. The number of hours
teenagers dedicated to watching DVD's
was only 10 Change noun form
DVDs
hours
in the initial and final years,
but reached a peak of over 15 Remove the comma
apply
hours
in consecutive years 2004 and 2005.Submitted by ayushraj304 on
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