Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that holding animals in zoos
is
a negative and cruel thing, while others believe that it helps to safe wild animal Suggestion
are
species
. Use synonyms
This
essay agrees that zoos are beneficial to the fauna saving. It will discuss both points of view.
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life
of animals in Suggestion
the life
such
places could be tough. Not all staff behave Linking Words
good
and Suggestion
better
well
make
their best to comfort their life. In some engage in
do
zoos animals
could be underfed and could be held in the inappropriate conditions. Accept comma addition
zoos, animals
Consequently
, it can cause health problems. Linking Words
Such
tendency is a cruel Linking Words
behavior
with wild manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
species
, and Use synonyms
such
places should be closed. In some developing countries, Linking Words
for example
, many zoos are Linking Words
underfunded
, and they have no possibility to hold wild animals in the proper conditions.
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On the other hand
, zoos and natural reserves are extremely useful as wild animals can feel safe there. People take care of them, feed them with a proper food. Linking Words
Such
places could be seen as an artificial reserve for numerous Linking Words
species
. If people close Use synonyms
such
zoos many wild animals will face problems and will Linking Words
finally
become extinct. Polar bears, Linking Words
for instance
, are secured in Linking Words
natural
reserves, while in their natural habitat the significant shortage is observed.
To sum up, while the benefits of zoos for preserving wild Suggestion
nature
species
are clear, many people still believe that they are cruel to animals. Use synonyms
However
, as long as animals are being kept in the decent conditions, the advantages of Linking Words
such
places are numerous.Linking Words
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