Some people are of the opinion that people are naturally born as a leader while others feel that leadership skills can be learned. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

It is often believed that some people are gifted leaders, while opponents state that
leadership
consists of skills, which can be learned and developed. Personally, I reckon to the
second
statement that
leadership
material can be discovered through sheer hard work and determination.
To begin
with, it is
some what
to a small degree or extent
somewhat
true that some individuals are gifted with personal traits and skills, which allow one to be a natural leader. There are individuals who are born with oratory skills
ane
located at or attached to
on
charismatic personality like
mahatma
(Hinduism) term of respect for a brahmin sage
Mahatma
gandhi
daughter of Nehru who served as prime minister of India from 1966 to 1977 (1917-1984)
Gandhi
and
william
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William
wallace
English writer noted for his crime novels (1875-1932)
Wallace
. These people showed natural ability at an early age. William
wallace
English writer noted for his crime novels (1875-1932)
Wallace
Wells
,
for example
, emerged as a powerful
leaders
Suggestion
leader
in society when he was only twenties.
This
is only one of many
example
Suggestion
examples
of inborn leaders who displayed distinctive personality traits at
such
a young age and possessing
natrual gift
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a natural gift
natural gift
predispose them to
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
in being a natural leader.
However
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that
leadership
cam be taught and
this
skill can be achieved it one practices properly and makes a considerable effort. Nowadays, a large number of
leadership
programme
are offered
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is offered
by
institute
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the institute
and collages. If
this
skill can not be learned, several people will not participate in these programmes. People who are shy and
inconfidence
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in confidence
can improve their skills through these courses. Public speaking,
for instance
, is
a
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an
essential skill for leaders, which can be developed and each person can learn essence of good body language and other elements of good public speaking.
As a result
, they can influence people with their words, which ultimately make them better leaders. In conclusion, despite the fact that personality features are more likely to be
inherited but
Accept comma addition
inherited, but
leadership
skills can be developed as
human
Suggestion
humans
a human
can learn the traits of good
leader
Suggestion
leadership
.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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