People think that money can bring happiness. However, having more than enough money leads to problems. Do u agree or disagree?
Some people define
money
as a source of happiness
,
albeit people will have to contend with some major problems resultant of owning steep Accept space
,
money
.It is disagreed that happiness
can be achieved by other approaches except money
.This
essay will debate other activities except wealth,
work, hobby and family, being seen as a joy and Accept space
,
happiness
and some other factors in details.
Firstly
, money
is not something makes you feel enjoy and achieve a successful life
,
for some, being around a family or being chock-full of work can sense a satisfaction and enjoy.Unless people have Accept space
,
money
, it is possible having a feeling of joy from being with the loved ones
Accept comma addition
ones, however
however
human value
is not measured by the wealth they own. Suggestion
the human value
Moreover
, it feels unique but being busy with the activities you are fond of, can share feelings of happy
. Suggestion
happiness
For example
, 87% of Uzbek people spend their most time hanging out with people they appreciate, as money
doesn't play a vital role in their life
.
In other words
, every and each person interpret happiness
in various ways and for those favouring to vulnerables
who live in poverty is the main source of feeling happy. It seems susceptible to attack
vulnerable
unbelievable but
some people help poor humans as much as they afford despite taking low salary, having a moderate living condition or many eatables Accept comma addition
unbelievable, but
however
they aren't affluent people but they are spiritually wealthy humans. For example
, 63% of Japanese donate and help ropey people, as it results feeling a great relish.
In conclusion, wealth can be a consequence of the satisfaction in life
in some prospective but welfare of family, loved ones, work and mainly help is the major result of the happiness
in life
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