The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The two pictorial maps illustrate an Island, before and after the renovation of some tourist
facilities
.
Overall
, there are so many tourist facilities
that have added
after construction Add a missing verb
been added
such
as footpaths and vehicle track
but no changes in Fix the agreement mistake
tracks
total
area. Correct article usage
the total
However
, the attraction of tourists will increase after renovation.
According to
before
the map, there were no restaurants Change preposition
apply
and
reception for tourists. Correct word choice
or
However
, the most important thing is that there ware
no accommodation Correct your spelling
were
facilities
for tourists. As a result
, many houses have built
Add a missing verb
been built
such
as about 14 houses, besides
the restaurant and reception. Moreover
, the swimming facility has added new infrastructure.
However
, the boating system has developed recently and also
pier has added
which is connected by a vehicle track. The most interesting thing is that the number of coconut trees remained unchanged even Add a missing verb
been added
if
after construction and Correct word choice
apply
developed
so many Replace the word
development
facilities
. Before there was no footpath to walk. As a result
, for creating a walking opportunity, the footpath system introduces at three different locations which are noticeable.Submitted by sahoosain1994 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as a result, however, such".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words facilities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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