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Some people think that music plays an important role in society. Others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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Music
 has sparked much debate in general public opinion. Some people believe that
music
 has cr
ucial role i
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a crucial role
n society. Whereas, ot
her c
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
ontend that it is ty
pe o
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a type
the type
f entertainment which has used in leisure time. I put forth both sides of argument and explain the items have shaped my view to support the former perspective. Convincing arguments can be made that,
music
 has a host of benefits. It is not fair to overlook the advantages of
music
.
First
 and for most, these modern-da
ys l
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day
day's
ife deeply require some activities that help them to reveal their daily anxiety which is the grave consequence of their chosen lifestyle.
Furthermore
,
music
 ch
eer p
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cheers
eople up and help them create themselves free time to being re
lax a
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relaxed
relaxing
nd enjoy their time.
As a result
, we live in the world which is require ample activates to help people recharge their ba
ttery a
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batteries
nd become re
fresh f
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refreshed
or the days ahead. On the other side, it is obvious that,
music
 is a form of entertainment that easily linked us to our roots and traditions,
additionally
 prepare the atmosphere that en
joy o
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enjoys
ur gathering that we have.
Besides
, enable people sh
are d
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to share
ifferent tastes of
music
 with others. The other point noteworthy is ,
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,
music
 helps us express our fe
eling e
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feelings
asily. Ul
timately I f
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Ultimately, I
irmly believe that,
mu
sic even p
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music, even
lays the pivotal role more than the simple entertainment and boost our feeling and emotion as well. In a nutshell, by considering the reasons which have mentioned the above, we widely recognized that how vital role
music
 has in our hustle and bustle life. Donya Taghizadeh Maleki (academic)
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